both good.love the "info graphic" you put on the top image.good.conceptually brings your image to a higher level.you need a stronger typeface/bolder for "hail mary."have a look at ziggarat.text type on that opener is uninspired.and, suggest you lose the rule on the caption--perhaps rag the caption is a narrower graph lower on the page.for instance, behind no 9" head, above his shoulder.love.g.
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both good.
love the "info graphic" you put on the top image.
good.
conceptually brings your image to a higher level.
you need a stronger typeface/bolder for "hail mary."
have a look at ziggarat.
text type on that opener is uninspired.
and, suggest you lose the rule on the caption--
perhaps rag the caption is a narrower graph lower on the page.
for instance, behind no 9" head, above his shoulder.
love.
g.
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